zrl1130 发表于 2023-5-13 11:25   全显示 1楼
终于更新了，真不错，口味的话，还在适中阶段，不过女主的淫乱，堕落很彻底，对后面女主的心里描写会不会有什么影响？不知道后面还要怎么去体现，口味会不会一步一步的加重，如果要考虑写长篇的话，女主又堕落的太快，那就只能在玩法上做文章了，看看楼主的想象力，还有会不会加些人物，比如说女主的母亲，同学，闺蜜？持续关注，并且支持楼主！


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