| 该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-10-12 01:32 只看TA 22楼 |
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| Thanks for the good story. It's a good stroy writting from a female perstpective. However, I think the story can be polished a bit mroe because the author shall add more touch on female's physicalogical deteail which will make the story more interesting. |
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| 该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-10-12 02:14 只看TA 23楼 |
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| 以女性视角写得文章固然不错，可以很大程度上突出女性的感受，但是这样好像会不会也有一个缺点呢？就是男性的淫妻欲似乎就不是那么容易表达出来了啊！不过文章嘛，肯定也是需要多方面发展的哈！ |
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